NaPoWriMo 2015 Day 4 – Bitter Thoughts (version 3)

Today’s NaPoWriMo 2015 entry…


‘Bitter Thoughts (version 3)’

No sooner had I scribbled a new version of this poem then I refined it further. So the final version for you to consider….

Written whilst supping a pint of Worthington’s Bitter at The Boathouse, Sutton Park, Sutton Coldfield after a long hike.

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Bitter Thoughts (version 3)

After a morning walking
I’m now a sitter,
Pint in hand, no talking
Feeling bitter

© Nick Ritchie 2015



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